Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Chapter 16: What is Going on?

**At the end of the chapter, there'll be a bit of pic spam for the house.  I meant to add it to the end of the last chapter, but I forgot.**

Not long after Chase's birthday, Brent grew tired of his outrageous hairstyle and by the time Prom rolled around he had opted for something easy to maintain. Tanya was glad to see his style had started to become a bit more tame as well. She wanted her kids to have the freedom to express themselves though so she kept her thoughts about his style to herself. Besides it could be worse, she told herself, he could have been one of those kids that sagged their pants.

Tanya thought both boys looked extremely handsome the night of Prom. She just couldn't believe how old they were getting. Brent didn't have a date so he was glad that Chase was finally old enough to join him. The boys had a great time at the dance. Chase even managed to win a spot on the Prom Royalty court just like his big brother Anderson! Poor Brent though, had his heart broken when he asked his crush to dance and she rejected him.

After his Prom heartache, Brent threw himself back into discovering new potions on his chemistry set. While he had finally come to terms with the fact he was probably never going to create a cloning potion for his father, he had found a love for science in the process. The possibilities were almost endless. From the smallest prank potions to incredible feats of science, such as when he turned himself into a ghost for a few hours.
The week after the boys went to Prom, Tanya quietly had a birthday. She didn't want anyone to know about this one. She was now in her middle age and started to worry that she was getting old. During this mid life crisis, her first order of business was returning to the racy clothing she wore before Anderson was born. Short skirts and shirts with plenty of cleavage. And of course, her favorite knee high black leather boots.

The next thing she did was head to the local nightclub.  Tanya had read that the place was suppose to be packed that night as there were several popular bands playing. Tanya was surprised when the bouncer ushered her into the VIP section, she had figured with a night like this she'd need to be an A list celeb to get in there.  She headed straight towards the bar for a stiff drink to get the night started and then stopped dead in her tracks...

Tanya couldn't believe it. There was the man with the glowing eyes from her dreams! Wait, wasn't this the same bar she was at the night Grady had died? Was he here that night? Who the hell was this man? Or better yet, what was he? Why can't she remember? The more questions that raced through her head, the dizzier she felt. Tanya felt the room start to spin and she stumbled forward a bit, trying to make sense of everything. She felt this strange sensation, like she was no longer in control of her own actions.

The next thing Tanya can remember is standing in the upstairs computer area, staring at a strange piece of art. The painting seemed to be depicting a girl in all black, running from something, or trying to deflect something. Tanya wasn't quite sure what the painting meant and was shocked when Anderson told her she had stayed up all night painting it on the easel overlooking the backyard.

The more time Tanya spent around the painting, the more restless she felt. It was as if the painting was trying to tell her something, and she just couldn't understand its whispers yet. Maybe it held the secret to what happened the night the triplets were conceived. Maybe it could explain who or what their father was. And maybe, just maybe it could help her get through to Callie before it was too late. 





**Sorry the chapter was a bit short, the next chapter should be a bit longer, I just didn't want to give away too much before things heat up.  Gonna put the screen shots of the house here at the bottom.  Enjoy!**



14 comments:

  1. I hope she finds out who the creepy guy is soon. I know she is worried about Callie so hopefully that will give her the insight she needs for her daughter.

    Love all the pictures of the house.

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  2. Thanks Jazen, my favorite to decorate was the nursery hehe.

    She'll get some of her answers in the next couple chapters and will definitely find out who "creep guy" is :)

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  3. Oh This is building up nicely i'm dying to know what's going on with the mysterious man and of course the triplets!

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  4. I love the mystery you're creating with the guy at the bar. I wonder what he did to her to make het start painting like that. I also wonder if she'll remember him the next time she bumps into him. I just wish they had a chance to talk before Tanya drew a blank again.

    The painting looks hauntingly beautiful, Tanya needs to look into her subconcious and figure out what it's telling her.

    I loled at the midlife crisis, yep, father time catches up with all of us. She better hurry up and make them babies, the clock is ticking.

    I love the house, it's big yet so homely like.

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  5. @Angie

    You and me both! ;) hehe. I'm still not quite sure how it is all going to play out myself, but shouldn't be much longer before things become clearer.

    @Val

    Heh, I figured you'd like the mystery. I was worried about leaving it off the way I did but I think it adds just enough suspense for now :) The painting holds the answer to a lot of the mystery and soon she will at least get a few of those answers.

    She will remember that he is the one from her dreams, and that there is something odd, but I don't think she'll remember this last night out.

    Oh and yes, father time sure does have a way of creeping up on us doesn't he? lol. The clock is definitely ticking for her but I think she'll have a bit of time yet to have the children.

    Thank you for the compliments on the home :) I tried to keep the feel for what each person would like and left some of the things the game had in place like the living room.

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  6. Oh gosh! D:
    He's such a creeper... :?

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  7. Aaaaaah! This guy is so intriguing! I cannot WAIT to figure out what's goin' on! Lol. Great update, love the fact that Tanya's having a bit of a mid-life crisis. And the house looks awesome. :D Great update!

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  8. AHH! BabyDaddy is back! Omg!!!! I must find out who he is! maybe he isn't so much of a creeper as he seems? maybe he is trying to save her from a darker force at work? Tanya's middle ages already? wow...how time flys.....

    Poor Brent! He seems so smart...that girl was dumb to reject him! Love the house! the triplets room is beautiful!

    I MUST KNOW ABOUT THE BAR DUDE!!!!!!!!!!

    you never fail to amaze me with your writing...the only word I can really say now is...moar (except kinda in capitals with exclamation marks and several times, like such) MOAR!!!!!!!!! MOARMOARMOARMOARMOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MOAR!!!!!!!

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  9. I wanna know who this man is, I want to use him as well! DUN DUN DUN! Great chapter and I am glad that the kids are able to express themselves that's always nice!

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  10. @Drew

    He seems that way right now, but he may not be as bad as he seems.

    @Lynnwood

    All will be revealed soon :) Yeah she loves her kids but is really starting to miss the partying days hehe.

    @Lilystar

    He is back and soon we'll find out what his role in all of this will be :)

    Brent was crushed, but hopefully soon he'll realize that there is someone out there for everyone.

    Thank you so much for your comments on both the house and the writing. Your comment made my day, thank you, thank you, thank you!

    @Jessuku

    Hehe all will be revealed soon :) As for the man, I'm going to try to upload him to the exchange again soon. It failed when I tried before not sure why. The house will go up too I think.

    Thanks for reading everyone!

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  11. Love the mystery you waved in your story. Can't wait to read who he is. She can't paint pretty well. Maybe the painting can tell her something. Great update!

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  12. I meant she can paint pretty well. LOl. Was just re reading this chapter, to get the flow of the story more. When you read so much everything get mixed. Going to your next chapter :)

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  13. I figured that is what you meant :) And I know what you mean. Often I have to go back and re-read chapters, especially if it has been a bit between updates. Just so many great stories to keep up with hehe.

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  14. HE PUT HIS DAMN
    SPERM
    IN THE DAMN
    DRINK
    DX

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